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Reviews for Phantom of Hogwarts

magicalpresence2012.01.14 - 10:59AM38: 36- Alone At LastSigned
I had to laugh at the image of Severus legging it to the bathroom!

Author's Response: Hee! Well, it was pretty ridiculous, so laugh away! I'm glad you're enjoying it. :D Thanks so much for reviewing! :)

phantomofhogwarts2011.02.01 - 09:16AM38: 36- Alone At LastSigned
Oh this is such a good chapter! It is so nice to see them growing more and more amidst their exploring, and like you said in my last review response, yes , smut is hot but it is realistic and note perfect because it is the first time they are exploring each other so openly and its bound to be a little scary and nerve racking!!!

Author's Response: Exactly! Their physical exploration is a parallel for their emotional vulnerability in opening up to each other. I'm so glad you enjoyed it! :D Thanks again for reviewing! :)

Drinking chocolate2010.11.24 - 05:04PM38: 36- Alone At LastSigned
*nodding approvingly* In the interests of personal growth and doing for others, Snape accedes to Ms. Granger's wishes.

Author's Response: He's such an altruist sometimes, y/y? ROFL Thanks as always for reviewing :)

phantomofhogwarts2009.03.29 - 12:05PM38: 36- Alone At LastSigned
All right, I;m not going to lie, citrusy chapters are always a bit awkward for me, as I run into many stories that are ALL about the citrusy chapter, but when paired with a great plot they are very good indeed! I like that you include growth of their relationship and stuff not just a whole bunch of porn.

Author's Response: LOL!!! Exactly. I wanted to show that while the smut can be hot, it's not realistic for it to all be perfect the first time around. It's awkward and scary and embarrassing, but everyone experiences that, so it can strike a chord in people identifying with it. Thanks for a lovely review! :)

ElectricBloo2008.03.13 - 11:06PM38: 36- Alone At LastSigned
As the song says - feelin' hot hot hot. So I'm off to find some air conditioning before I can read another chapter. Cheers for posting.

Author's Response: LOL!! Well, I must say that I'm glad it came across as hot, and wasn't that way just to me (since that means the way I wrote it worked). :) Thanks so much for reviewing! :)

Guinnevere2006.09.02 - 01:24AM38: 36- Alone At LastSigned
“Where were we before we were interrupted?”

“Oh, I remember exactly where…”
Great leaping lemons! Wonderful chapter!

Author's Response: hehehehe Yeah, I have fun writing the lemons... in case it wasn't painfully obvious. LOL!!! ;)

lpf2006.06.23 - 12:19AM38: 36- Alone At LastSigned
Apparently Hermione and Snape got a slice of the lemon pie after the party instead of at it!

Author's Response: ROFL!!!!!!! Well, that's one way to put it, certainly! *giggles* :)

The Grim2005.07.03 - 03:59AM38: 36- Alone At LastSigned
awh, are you going to leave us hanging there? will the next chap continue right where we left off? oh, i am so spastic right now. throughout the entire chapter i got tense when they were tense. you truly have an amiable descriptive power that you should use more often! (believe me, i love describing things when i write, almost better than dialogue and anything else). eloquently write, and now i move on to the *last* chapter...*sobs, then composes herself* okay, i'm alright...i'll make it...please update as soon as you can, as i become apart of the multitude of anxiously waiting reviewers. :)

Author's Response: *happy dances* You have just described the whole reason I write the way I do. I feel like if it would affect me that way, hopefully it will affect others that way too, and they will be drawn into my work. When I see it working like this, it makes me a VERY happy woman! :) I'm just glad you don't feel that the description is too excruciatingly detailed. LOL Thanks again! :)

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