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Andromeda2011.10.26 - 11:27PM62: 56- Trying New ThingsSigned
Rghty, I really am going to sleep now, but I was just reading the beginning of this chapter and I noticed that there's a little slip in the formatting, as if the wrong part has been put in... it goes "He and Hermione exchanged a fleeting glance of acknowledgement before she spun to hurry out. The he said, “Just thinking about a project, Albus.”" Then further down it goes "cast a wary glance at the headmaster. His tone inviting no further questions, erplay with interest." I don't know if it's my browser or not, but I just thought you'd like to know. RIGHY, bed for me, can't wait to keep reading tomorrow!

Author's Response: How very bizarre! I just checked it, and it's all right on my end. Perhaps there was a momentary hiccup with the site as it was loading? I know sometimes the chapters aren't listed in order if I go to read the reviews. Or maybe there are gremlins in the works. *throws hands up* I'm sorry it messed up on you, and I hope it wasn't too confusing! Get some sleep, and I hope you continue to enjoy it. :D Thanks so much for reviewing! :)

Drinking chocolate2010.12.10 - 04:16PM62: 56- Trying New ThingsSigned
This is lovely, their simply holding each other and being together. [happy exhale] And Neville...I have read some people guessing that the Weasley twins are universally loved among HP readers, but I think Neville wears that crown! I am enjoying reading your smut passages while knitting sedately. Hee.

Author's Response: LOL Knitting and reading smut--quite the juxtaposition. ;) I'm glad you enjoyed their sweet moment. I wanted to make it clear that there really was more than just lust going on. And Neville IS the universal BAMF as far as I've seen amongst fen I know. Thanks so much for reviewing! :)

phantomofhogwarts2009.03.30 - 04:53PM62: 56- Trying New ThingsSigned
Oh I am so glad Severus is once again thinking of the future! Again, as I mentioned before the end was a bit awkward, but at the same time acceptable as Hermione is only preparing for her first time making love with the ma of her dreams...I wonder if she'll confide in Ginny or not.... As for Neville, I am even more happy now that Parvati has stopped being foolish!

Author's Response: Neville and Parvati are one of my favourite secondary storylines in this. LOL Neville is so awesome and I wanted to show him growing up and getting the girl too. ;) As for Hermione's plan, it IS rather methodical, just like her. LOL Thanks so much for reviewing! :)

ElectricBloo2008.03.17 - 04:04PM62: 56- Trying New ThingsSigned
Sticking to a musicals theme - Please Good Witch, is there any more? I'll take a rain check on the porridge front though. Cheers for posting.

Author's Response: LOL!! Oh, there's always more (it just takes longer and longer to get done *sigh*). Thanks for reviewing! :)

ministrychick772007.04.02 - 10:05AM62: 56- Trying New ThingsAnonymous
28-02-2007 06:16 Rated 10

can't wait till it's updated.. really looking forward to it

(and i'm not entirely sure how the rating system works. ten is the best, right? lol )

Author's Response: *blush* Yes, darlin, ten is the best, as are you!! *beams* Keep an eye out, it's in the queue... Thanks so much for reviewing! :)

MMADfa2007.04.02 - 10:04AM62: 56- Trying New ThingsAnonymous
26-02-2007 19:38 Rated 9

I do hope that Hermione's "research" doesn't end up causing problems between her & Severus. Of course, virtually everyone in fanfic land tends to ignore the fact that losing one's virginity doesn't always result in blood, since every woman's body is a bit different, and hymens can be more or less occlusive -- is that even a word? -- but given the trend, and Hermione's "exploration," I think it's a given that she's got a bit of something to break through. Whatever happens between them, I hope they get over any misunderstanding very quickly! I'd hate to see Severus act like an idiot over this. (Of course, he's a man, and therefore bound to be just a bit of one, anyway -- I just hope it's the endearing sort of idiocy rather than the I-want-to-bang-my-head-against-the-wall kind of idiocy! ;) )

Author's Response: Re: blood--you're right, and I know I certainly didn't want to go the route of "let's use your virgin's blood in a potion!" LOL However, in their previous encounters, he's already noticed the barrier is there, and she felt it, too. So, being the methodical kind of gal she is, she decided to get rid of it! *snerk* As for problems... we're getting there. *shifty eyes* Keep an eye out for the next chapter. It's been in queue for a couple of weeks now, so hopefully it'll show up soon. Thanks so much for reviewing! :)

Reader's Response: *sigh I'll be glad when the queue gets back down to a week or less.
But I'm shocked! No Virgin's Blood Potion? What kind of story is this, anyway? ;D (I'm sure the first few times that popped up in a story, it was quite clever . . . after a bit though, I just wanna groan! LOL)
I'll be watching the queue! (God, I love that word -- it's so fun to type 'queue' -- umm, a bit punchy -- must go get some sleep now!)

Serenity Moony2007.04.02 - 10:03AM62: 56- Trying New ThingsAnonymous
22-02-2007 05:33 Rated 10

Ahhh. The candle stick. Just read about that in my Black Lace book (read any of them?)
Phantom is soooo close to coming out over here. They're teasing me with tip of the tongue tastes (posters and articles etc) when all I want to do is run the length of my tongue up it and experience it all. *sighs*
Well away from the nastiness of advertising companies and on to the "You're so friggin' awesome!!!" because you are. Awesome that is :-D
Am really loving the story and, obviously, the smutty bit *grins like a fool* Am looking forward to next capter (always) and, unless I read wrong, Snapes reactions to her stretching. I wish I had a spell like that on my hands. *sighs again*

Annnnnyway. Keep up the good work. I hope you still enjoy writing this as much as I enjoy reading it ^_^ But I do believe you are.

Sere

Author's Response: Nope, never heard of Black Lace books. LOL But, I've read about them in other erotica/porn stories. *snerk* Hey, I figure I gotta go with what seems plausible... Where are you that Phantom is about to come out? As for the next chapter, it's in the queue, so keep an eye out for it. I'm so glad you've been enjoying it, and thanks so much for reviewing! :)

Reader's Response: Melbourne. Am aquiver with anticipation.

Myene2007.04.02 - 10:02AM62: 56- Trying New ThingsAnonymous
19-02-2007 05:54 Rated 10

just read your entire story so far, its great! Nice bits of smut interplaced with good plot and background stories.

O, and how come no one noticed Dobbie's "I Love Harry Potter' badge?

Author's Response: *blush* Aw, you're so sweet! *happy dances* I'm so glad you're enjoying it. As for Dobby's badge--it just hasn't been one of those things that has come up. :) Hope you keep enjoying it. The next chapter is in queue! Thanks so much for reviewing! :)

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