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| Razzberry |
 Posted: Tue Jan 11, 2005 1:50 am |
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My first ever attempt at SS/HG is started on Ashwinder.
Title: Mistakes Men Make
Summary: Professor Snape finds Hermione letting Ron 'borrow' her homework, and assigns her detention, but in a fit of pity, decides to give her a chance to redeem herself. When he sends her a note telling her to be prepared to convince him to allow her to make up the assignment, one has to ask if the words she read and the ones he wrote were the same.
Chapter 1: Miscommunication
A lack of effective communication sets the stage.
Rated R
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| RachelW |
| Posted: Tue Jan 11, 2005 2:13 am |
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I'm watching the topic! What an opening chapter! I read it earlier today. What a miscommunication!!! Poor Hermione...Poor Snape for that matter, I'm picturing all sorts of awkwardness ensuing. Hope updates are quick in coming, that was a terrible cliffhanger to start a story with! Evil Author! Evil Author!  |
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| sophierom |
| Posted: Tue Jan 11, 2005 8:07 pm |
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I really enjoyed your first chapter, Razzberry. I left a review at Ashwinder, and I think it may have led you to think I didn't like the story ... au contraire! I'm definitely looking forward to your update.  |
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| Razzberry |
| Posted: Wed Jan 12, 2005 12:08 am |
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Thank you both for your comments. I am going to ask, though, that we keep this thread clear of conversation since I'm urging people to 'watch the topic' for updates. I don't want everyone inundated with emails 
Jen (who is also using this reply as a test to see if the email function is going to work like she hopes it will) |
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| Razzberry |
| Posted: Wed Jan 12, 2005 2:40 am |
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Chapter 2-- "Haste" is posted on Ashwinder.
http://ashwinder.sycophanthex.com/viewstory.php?sid=8574
edit: the email alert DOES work! It just doesn't send me a message when I post, presumably because the board is smart and knows I'm the one who posted. |
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| goblynn |
| Posted: Thu Jan 13, 2005 12:23 am |
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| Posting a reply *after* I began watching this topic, just to see if it is, indeed, not working. Excellent, marvelous story, BTW. |
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| Razzberry |
| Posted: Thu Jan 13, 2005 12:55 pm |
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And Chapter Three: Presumption is posted.
In this episode, we find splotches of humor (at least the early reviews have a lot of 'lol' going on) and moments of tenderness.
And this email thing IS working, so clickity-click!!
Thank you all for reading and reviewing!
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| Odd Doll |
| Posted: Sat Jan 15, 2005 12:07 am |
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Maybe this should be called "Mistakes 18 year old girls make"? I'm enjoying this a lot, although the humiliation on both their parts makes me squirm.
I wonder if he will ever get up the nerve to talk to her and beg her to tell her side of the story? She's the only one who can save him.
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| Razzberry |
| Posted: Sun Jan 16, 2005 12:08 am |
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Chapter 4: Misrepresentation has been added!
In which Hermione wakes up...
Thanks to everyone who is following the story! I'm enthralled that people actually read.
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| Razzberry |
| Posted: Tue Jan 18, 2005 1:07 pm |
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Mistakes Men Make has been updated on Ashwinder.
Summary: Professor Snape finds Hermione letting Ron 'borrow' her homework,
and assigns her detention, but in a fit of pity, decides to give her a
chance to redeem herself. When he sends her a note telling her to be
prepared to convince him to allow her to make up the assignment, one has
to ask if the words she read and the ones he wrote were the same.
Chapter 5: Gossip
In which... eh, read the title and guess what happens
http://ashwinder.sycophanthex.com/viewstory.php?sid=8574
Teaser:
“So last night, Hermione had a detention with him, left his office crying, was gone all night long and no one has seen either of them today. Hrm. I wonder if that’s a coincidence.” Padma uncapped her ink and peered at her book; Anthony and Lisa stared wide-eyed at her.
“What are you suggesting?” Lisa demanded.
“I’m not suggesting anything,” Padma replied. “Did anyone get the answer to number three? I spent half an hour looking for that this morning…”
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And, I've been asked by a few people what else I've written.
Razz on Occlumency:
http://ashwinder.sycophanthex.com/viewuser.php?uid=2035
(careful, there's a trilogy in there. Still Waters Run Deep/Bittersweet/Tomorrow We May Die. In that order.)
My story on Wolfsbane:
http://wolfsbane.sycophanthex.com/viewstory.php?sid=1164
(Spurs from the trilogy mentioned above, but exists independently-- if you can accept the characters as they stand after 300,00 words of development, you probably won't have a problem with it)
And on FF.Net--
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2028854/1/
A position of Power-- a non-ship story that still dances in my head but unfortunately takes a backburner to everything else that usurps my attention.
Jen
aka Razz
aka She-Who-Has-Too-Many-Irons-In-The-Fire |
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| Razzberry |
| Posted: Mon Jan 24, 2005 4:41 am |
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Chapter 6-- Mistrust is up!
I just don't understand how everyone else in the world always seems to find out when this is posted before I do...
In this chapter, we speculate whether or not Dumbledore is insane.
Teaser:
“Dear Severus,” she said breathily, wisping into the room as though she were a bespangled and be-sequined puff of smoke. She placed her spidery hands on his cheeks, fingers splayed, and tilted his face upward, looking into his eyes with a mix of pity and morbid interest. “Your eyes hold the depth of a freshly dug grave,” she whispered, even her whisper trembling. “The eyes are the window to the soul, and yours are draped in the shroud of mourning. Not even a flicker…” |
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| Razzberry |
| Posted: Tue Jan 25, 2005 4:04 am |
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Bet you weren't expecting this so soon...
Chapter 7: Hesitation is posted!
In which Snape's courage is tested as he faces the most dire challenge of all: students. |
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| Razzberry |
| Posted: Thu Jan 27, 2005 5:03 am |
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Chapter 8: Judgement is posted
In which Severus explains himself before his peers. |
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| Razzberry |
| Posted: Sat Jan 29, 2005 11:28 pm |
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Chapter 9: Vagueness is posted.
And the story is complete.
Thanks to all who have read and left comments.
Jen |
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