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< Seekers ~ Desperately Seeking a Beta for SS/HG Fic |
| Annie Talbot2 |
 Posted: Fri Oct 21, 2005 11:39 pm |
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Hi! I write as Annie Talbot and I have a work in progress at Ashwinder called "I'll Never Take Advantage". While it has been well-received, I've been advised to find a beta, particularly for canon issues. A thoughtful reader willing to offer concrit would be profoundly helpful!
Some people have been squicked by my story...Hermione is in a coma following the Final Battle; in order to keep her in the Wizarding World (contrary to the wishes of her parents) Snape has married her. The story is told entirely in the first person POV, with the first chapter being Snape, the second McGonnagall, and the third Hermione. I anticipate that it will extend another five chapters or so. It is definitely NOT HBP compliant.
If you'd be interested in beta-ing, please let me know! Chapter 3 definitely needs work before it can be posted, and I'd really appreciate the help!
Thanks,
Annie |
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| Kyzeli Snape |
| Posted: Sun Oct 23, 2005 9:32 pm |
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i sounds really interesting. I haven;t got a lot to do these days and would be more than happy to help you. let me know if you need anything, my e-mail is kk_yankeefan@yahoo.com
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| sheri164 |
| Posted: Tue Oct 25, 2005 6:54 pm |
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I read your first two chapters. Your depiction of Snape is quite mesmerizing. And McGonagall's journal entries are very much in character.
If you haven't yet found a beta, I would be happy to review your writings. I have an updated profile at the accredited beta site. Thusfar, I've worked with three writers who have expressed satisfaction with the results of my work with them.
A story like yours shouldn't have to wait for an update.
What is Hermione thinking?
Sheri |
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