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| Mia1 |
 Posted: Sun Nov 06, 2005 6:46 am |
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Name: Mia
E-mail: cleojinxmia@yahoo.com
Story Title: Despondeo
Summary: Sirius Black meets the Muggle Helena while on the run. Turmoil forces him to introduce her to a bizarre new world, where she finally meets the man she's been dreaming about since she was a small child.
Rating: W (so far)
Category: SS/Canon
Genre: General
Ship: Helena/Sirius, Helena/Snape
Warnings: Abuse, Character death, Drug abuse, HBP Spoilers, Self-mutilation, and torture.
I need a beta reader for grammatical errors mainly. This is my first fan fiction. Any other advice would be appreciated as well.
I have three chapters complete so far. 
I thought I did well gametically,  but my first chapter got kicked back fast. Boy, was I wrong.
Please help!
Thanks
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| Mia1 |
| Posted: Sun Nov 06, 2005 7:46 pm |
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I wanted to add(after reading Azazello's sticky) that this will be pretty long. Also...Helena isn't really a Muggle. She has a rare gift that has been exploited by her adoptive "parent." She has only dreamed about the wizarding world. There is a very good reason why she never received her owl.
Come on...you know you want to read it!  |
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