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< Seekers ~ Need sanity check for Redemption Epilogue |
| phoenix |
 Posted: Tue Mar 21, 2006 1:53 pm |
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Joined: 22 Feb 2005
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Well, folks, the end is coming. I've not heard back from beta for a while and I'd like to have another set of us take a look at the Epilogue to make sure it makes sense. I've already changed it significantly once, ans I'm not sure I'm entirely happy with it right now.
I'm not looking for someone who's an expert on spelling and grammar, but more a check of the plot, make sure I tie up all the loose ends. The link to the story is below, but if you've not read all 24 chapters, this may not be the beta job for you. Rated Adult. I would expect that this epilogue will not go beyond 6 pages or about 1500 words.
PM, email me or reply here.
http://pureblood.sycophanthex.com/viewstory.php?sid=700
LM has lost his family to the Dark Lord's vengeance and has decided enough is enough. Realizing it's time to switch sides for good, he has to convince the Order that he is sincere, and once in their good graces, plot his redemption. |
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| phoenix |
| Posted: Wed Mar 22, 2006 2:03 pm |
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Just so everyone knows, I did find a brave volunteer.  |
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