Joined: 02 Jul 2005
Posts: 95
Location: Australia
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Name: Beginning with L
Rating:W (R) (Just being precautious for later scenes, in case of violence. No sex. Perhaps some bad language.)
Ship:SS/OC
Genre: Angst/drama
Particulars: I use MS Word.
Mostly I need help with punctuation, but my grammer also needs double checking.
Any suggestions on my plot, cannon and anything else will be greatly appreciated.
I doubt it will be very long, 10 chapters at the most.
Most chapters will be between 1000 and 2000 words.
I am fine with how long it takes you. (I understand not everyone has as much time on their hands as me!) Just get it back to me as soon as you can. Although months and years are cutting it a bit fine!
I am competent at HTML coding.
Summary: The first chapter will be background information for my plot. Story is based in memories.
I will be starting where HBP left off and then head to the battlefield for the body of the story:
Severus is dieing on the battlefield and still he is haunted by his past. First his mother going to Azkaban for him and then he killed Dumbledore.
But one memory haunts him in particular. His lover was killed by Voldemort because of his information. (This is the main plot which will involve reliving Severus' school years.)
Preview:
A man with straggly black hair stood over a small woman cowering in a dark corner of a dingy room, illuminated by the light of a single light bulb covered with a cracked glass shade, the room appeared smaller then it was.
Looking closely the watcher could see the red weals on the woman’s face where the man had slapped her. He was intoxicated, not unusual for this time of day.
“You’re shcum! Becaush of YOU my shon ish shcum.”
If you are interested E-mail me at:
wongawasere@hotmail.com |
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