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| morgaine_dulac | 2008.04.18 - 02:56PM | 1: Poem: Ocean of Silence | Signed |
| The German version is beautiful as well. Thank you for sharing. | |||
| morgaine_dulac | 2008.04.17 - 04:08PM | 1: Poem: Ocean of Silence | Signed |
| I'd love to read your original German version. Do you still have it? Author's Response: I do.... Ein Ozean aus Schweigen Einsam liegen sie da und unentdeckt Wie Inseln, Gefühle schon lange vergessen In einem Meer aus Schweigen, das sich erstreckt Hinter den schwarzen Augen, die mich besessen. Manchmal, nur manchmal ließt du mich schauen, ließt mich die Kontinente erahnen. Warum nur, willst du mir nicht vertrauen? Lässt mich den Weg zu ihnen bahnen. Hinter dem Ozean aus Schweigen Liegen sie immer noch unentdeckt. Niemandem wirst du den Weg dorthin zeigen. Wie gerne nur hätt ich dein Herz erweckt. Ich kam ihm zu nah, dem rettenden Land Da stießt du mich fort und hast mich verbannt. | |||
| sophierom | 2005.02.19 - 10:09PM | 1: Poem: Ocean of Silence | Signed |
| Normally, I'm not a fan of poetry, but I really liked this. You capture Snape's dysfunctional emotional state quite well. Author's Response: Thank you very much, that is a very nice compliment. :-) | |||
| EllieK | 2005.01.01 - 10:10PM | 1: Poem: Ocean of Silence | Signed |
| Very nice and an enjoyable read. ;) Author's Response: Thanks a lot. Will try to post something longer some time but am currently working on fics for other archives (Pureblood and Chaos). | |||
| LariLee | 2004.12.30 - 05:42PM | 1: Poem: Ocean of Silence | Signed |
| Wonderful images! ~Lisa Author's Response: Thanks. Originally, the poem was written in German and there it was a sonnet. In hindsight, I actually like the English version better. | |||
| Vocalion | 2004.12.30 - 04:04PM | 1: Poem: Ocean of Silence | Signed |
| Evocative and moody. Nicely done. Occlumency needs more poetry to get up to speed with Ashwinder. Author's Response: Thanks very much. And I'll try my best to write more. | |||
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