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| DarkShine07 | 2007.12.21 - 01:56PM | 2: Betrayals | Signed |
| I love your story so far, it's very well written and has very complex composition. It makes me think more than the typical story, so good job! I can't wait for more. :) Author's Response: Thanks for your review; I'm flattered you like it. I've been improved by my beta's criticisms; I do have some more waiting.... | |||
| LogicalQuirk | 2007.12.20 - 03:25PM | 2: Betrayals | Signed |
| You can't help but feel for Snape even while hating what he's done. I thought that the repetition you used towatds the end really embodied how tortured he was about the decision; how it went through his mind so many times. Author's Response: I used to write poetry a lot; I really worked on the ending, trying to use repetition and rhythm to establish an obsession--sounds like I succeeded at least partially. Thanks for letting me know! | |||
| LogicalQuirk | 2007.12.20 - 03:15PM | 1: Requests | Signed |
| How sad - Snape genuinely thinks he could have her, but knows it wouldn't really be her so sacrifices his own pleasure. And how very IC that he should be such a mastermind and schemer. Author's Response: I doubt he was ever entirely sure he could have made the sacrifice had he not realized Moldy-shorts would never had let him keep her... I hope you enjoyed the scheming. Thanks for the review. | |||
| Deeble | 2007.12.18 - 09:28PM | 1: Requests | Signed |
| Wow. That's powerful. The awfulness of the plan, and then the realization that it's impossible, that he won't really have ~her~ and wouldn't have the shell of her for long. Author's Response: There's a sequel... | |||
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