Reviews for That Evening, on the Stairs
| Owlbait |
2011.03.06 - 03:05PM |
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| It is so unbearably sad to think Severus is simply not destined for happiness. That even if he had it, the entire world would be out of balance and tip into the dark. It was still lovely to see that glimpse of things gone right for him. |
| Neko Mata |
2010.12.02 - 06:43PM |
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| Love how things turned out! Very inspiring! |
| rachel123 |
2009.04.19 - 11:18PM |
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| I've thought of this alternative many times, and have always come to the same conclusion.
Things just don't seem to work out without Snape being miserable. :/
On the brighter side, I think you're brilliant, and the story was fantastic. :) |
| Sylvia Linslade |
2008.10.06 - 10:51PM |
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| Fascinating picture of how maybe things are the way they are suppsoed to be, even if maybe they aren't the way we wish they could be... |
| invisibilitycloak2 |
2008.08.26 - 11:54AM |
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| amazing story which pretty much answers all questions of what would have happened if... |
| LaBibliographe |
2008.08.13 - 09:40PM |
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This was purely haunting. We want so much for Snape to have had something good in his life and you let him have it - for awhile. This short story reminds me of the Ernest Hemingway short story, "The Short, Happy lIfe of Francis Macomber". There are some inexact parallels. Excellent writing with a believable alternate reality that chills even as it gives a desirable warmth to Severus' life. |
| ard |
2008.08.11 - 09:26AM |
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| Loved this version of the story. Have been checking everyday to see when you would post again after Jane. Glad your back and looking forward to more |
| morgaine_dulac |
2008.08.10 - 04:09AM |
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| So Severus Snape really did protect the world, not just Harry Potter. I liked your piece very much. Thanks for sharing. /M |
| Scary Bear Hair |
2008.08.09 - 10:59PM |
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| Oh my, libertyelyot recommended this fic on her LJ, so I came and checked it out and I must say it is lovely. The ending packs a nice punch too. It has a haunting quality, like a nightmarish fairytale. Excellent writing! :D |
| Deeble |
2008.08.09 - 10:15PM |
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| Powerful. The ending is a punch to the gut even though it's inevitable. |
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