Reviews for Two Sides Against the Middle
morgaine_dulac |
2008.10.15 - 09:36AM |
27: November Second |
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I think you did a great job writing about little Marcus. /M
Author's Response: Thank you. |
makaem |
2008.10.14 - 08:27PM |
27: November Second |
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I wanted to wait until I composed myself to review, but the second reading left me sadder than the first. It's a lovely chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you. I knew you would be sad about this one. It made me so sad to write it. |
debjunk |
2008.10.14 - 05:57PM |
27: November Second |
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That was a tough chapter to read, especially the first part. You've hit a place where most authors do not go in the death of the baby. I'm sure it was a bit comforting to them to actually be able to interact with Marcus before he died. That was very well done.
Author's Response: Thank you. It was hard when I realized that the story was taking me here, and I tried to make it easier on you all (and myself) by keeping this pregnancy in the background. |
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