Reviews for Always By Your Side
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2009.09.11 - 07:43AM |
12: XII: The Shrieking Shack |
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I'm so glad to be the first to review! This chapter is absolutely beautiful! You made me wait a lot (and didn't remember to post a preview, of course, but you are forgiven), but the result is really worthwhile. You made me smile and cry.
Smile, at sentences like "And he had given Severus the shock of his life. And his afterlife."
Cry, when I read about Morgaine's desperation in the Shack. So touching. Also her memories of Albus' death and of Severus death, are little shining moments. And Demeter trying to speak with her mother... You know how I feel about children. Well, no space enough to express all my great satisfaction. Excellent job! A bug hug from emotional me(p).
Author's Response: Previews cost extra nowadays :P It's funny how you like the chapters I struggle the most with. That just shows how very different we think. Enjoy the weekend. I am looking forward to peace. |
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