Reviews for A Nagini and Severus Tale
Agnus Castus |
2016.01.01 - 11:17AM |
21: Ophiuchus Ascending |
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Vicarious traumatisation... Severus really got more than he bargained for whilst probing Nagini's mind! His confrontation with Rodolphus was deliciously cruel and satisfying to read. I also enjoyed your characterisation of Narcissa, she often struck me as quite perceptive and appeared to understand the value of unconditional love. Given the horrors of Nagini's recent experiences, Severus seems to have stepped up to the plate and developed further into the man we know from the original books. Very nicely done!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for continuing to read and the kind feedback. Absolutely feel the same way about Narcissa. So glad that events are coming across as intended--yes, will continue to explore and take him more into the man we know from the books, maybe with some embellishments;-)
On another note, *wands up* to Alan Rickman... Thank you again for the encouragement, truly, deeply appreciate it! |
Agnus Castus |
2015.10.24 - 05:31PM |
20: Something Lost, Something Found |
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So pleased you've updated this story. Your characterisations continue to delight, and I look forward to the remaining journey.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and the feedback, truly appreciate it! Glad the characterisations are coming across clear enough--things will now move along speedily to the end, working (always too slowly) on the final three chapters (maybe two if I can compact all the loose ends, but... We'll see), so a bit more of this particular journey;-) Thank you once again, truly, deeply grateful! |
Agnus Castus |
2015.10.03 - 03:41PM |
19: Caught and Found |
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Nagini's encounter with Voldemort was gripping! A good balance of shock, terror and suspense, and a taste of things to come. Poor Severus, trying to contain his emotions but struggling against the overwhelming onslaught... It's satisfying to experience his feelings in full force before he learns to discipline his mind. Excellent chapter!
Author's Response: Dearest Agnus Castus, thank you for reading and the generous feedback, truly appreciate it! Yes, wanted to explore a it of Severus' emotions before he discipline's his mind to what seemingly is numbness to certain emotions later on, depriving himself... So happy that it came across as intended--thank you again! |
Agnus Castus |
2015.08.31 - 04:35PM |
18: A Restitution of Sorts, A Runespoor and the Horklump |
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Seems there's a few new chapters for me to read - I'll be catching up soon! I enjoyed your characterisation of Hagrid, and glad to be with the fearless Nagini leading Peter through the Forbidden Forest. Let's hope this special Horklump is good news for her and Severus :)
Author's Response: Dearest Agnus Castus, thank you so much for continuing to read and for the lovely feedback, truly appreciate it! Hagrid is always a special challenge but fun to write:-) Needed to have Peter and Nagini have some interaction while still at Hogwarts--thank you again for the generous interest, hope you are well *waving hello!* |
roni0811 |
2015.07.09 - 06:57PM |
19: Caught and Found |
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hope nagini and peter is okay! update soon... love everyone's personalities...
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and the encouraging feedback--truly appreciate it! So happy that you find everyone engaging enough; thank you again for your feedback! Am working on the finishing the next chapter soon. More about the effects on Nagini and Peter in later chapters. |
roni0811 |
2015.07.09 - 06:31PM |
17: Horologium Ascending - Part Two |
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sad that severus couldn't protected hiselve and nagai.. i figure know some spell...
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and the feedback--was trying to capture a younger Severus who hadn't become as powerful/masterful as he'd become as an adult, and also wanted to explore how unfair & cruel being outnumbered, bullied by the others could be... Thank you so much, truly appreciate your interest and impressions!<3 |
roni0811 |
2015.07.09 - 08:05AM |
10: Hogwarts, Lovegood & Hope |
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wonder what the evil the ring possessed!! great chapie..
Author's Response: Thank you so much--it is indeed an evil ring, a twisted symbol between Rodolphus, Lucius and others, more will be revealed and related back to it. Thank you again for reading and for all of your encouraging feedback, truly appreciate it and am so happy, thanks again!<3<3<3 |
roni0811 |
2014.04.06 - 10:31PM |
1: A Turn of Events |
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an interesting story!!update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and for your kind feedback, truly appreciate it! I'm sorry it's been so long to respond... real life set me back a bit, but I'll be catching up on this story very soon. Thank you again! |
Asteria |
2014.02.08 - 10:38PM |
18: A Restitution of Sorts, A Runespoor and the Horklump |
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Please. please write more soon. I love this story so much!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and for the encouraging feedback--truly appreciate it! I'll be trying to finish the next chapter and submit & post soon. So happy that you're enjoying it--thank you again! |
Anastasia Witchling |
2013.07.30 - 04:41PM |
18: A Restitution of Sorts, A Runespoor and the Horklump |
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So far, I am enthralled and that is a good thing! Can't wait to read the rest...
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and the lovely feedback--truly appreciate it! I'm working on getting the next chapter finished, trying to smoothe out points to start bringing the story full circle--thanks again! |
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