Reviews for Quantum Mechanics
WelkinCooper |
2012.05.09 - 08:20PM |
17: A Quantum of Grief |
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I love this chapter. It's so easy for her to hear what she wants to hear, and put her interpretation on his actions because she loves him so much. He's deliciously callous about everything.
Author's Response: Yes. She thinks she's gotten over everything and she's much better put together, but when it comes down to it, she's still got a lot to learn. And right now he's raw pain and young and self-centered. Thanks for reading and reviewing! |
nagandsev |
2011.04.20 - 12:52PM |
17: A Quantum of Grief |
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Effective chapter, the hot/cold repeated usage and treatment of his character to her is hard to stomach time and time again; it's hard to see her keep longing/wanting him after everything he has done/is doing to her, and his cold, cruel detachment - good work!
Author's Response: It was a chapter that was easy and hard to write. It came to mind in a flash, but seeing just how ugly his treatment of her was gave me the creeps. Thanks for reviewing! |
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