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| June W | 2004.08.12 - 09:12PM | 18: Chapter 18: Home at Last | Anonymous |
| Hmmm, okay, so maybe it was a good thing that Tonks has forgotten some of what happened between her and Severus. Still, I'm very glad to see Tonks and her aunt able to talk openly about these matters. Now, a little more Snape-Lillith interaction, please? Pretty please? Author's Response: Patience........ | |||
| June W | 2004.08.09 - 07:40PM | 17: Chapter 17: The Long Way Home | Anonymous |
| Jon and Meredith are such WONDERFUL friends! They're so sweet to extend a hand to Severus too, and while I like them a lot, and would enjoy seeing them again in the story, I'm still glad to see our couple back home at Hogwarts. Poor Severus - "Aunt Lily" was a real shock.... heh-heh... | |||
| Melpomene Erato | 2004.08.06 - 06:25PM | 16: Chapter 16: ......And A Longer Night | Anonymous |
| Noooooooo! (sighs in frustration) | |||
| June W | 2004.08.06 - 04:27PM | 16: Chapter 16: ......And A Longer Night | Anonymous |
| Bucket of freezing water ... yup, that qualifies as another cliffhanger. She is so wonderful and perfect to him, and he gives her that figurative "bucket"! AAUGH! | |||
| feastorfamine | 2004.08.04 - 06:28PM | 7: Chapter 7: Discoveries Are Made | Anonymous |
| good good good. Question, though: Would Slytherin accept Snape as head of house if he was muggle-born? Would he have been accepted into Voldemort's inner circle if he was Muggle-born? Doesn't seem right, somehow. Author's Response: Slytherin has accepted non pure-bloods for centuries and it was Dumbledore who made him Head of House. As for Voldemort, well, he's have to know, wouldn't he? Author's Response: Gawd! Can’t even write two sentences without my Beta. And she says she doesn’t add value...... | |||
| feastorfamine | 2004.08.04 - 05:47PM | 5: Chapter 5: The Continued Transformation of Severus Snape | Anonymous |
| wow, I like the character of Lillith. She's no-nonsense, but warm, and there seems to be something deeper about her, something we'll hopefully find out in later chapters? (hint hint) Great story so far. | |||
| Estrilda | 2004.08.04 - 01:52AM | 1: Chapter 1: A Change of Plan | Anonymous |
| Okay - please ignore the typo in my review - it is kind of funny in a warped way, don't you think? Author's Response: Yup, that's how it happens! Thanks again for the review. | |||
| Estrilda | 2004.08.04 - 01:51AM | 1: Chapter 1: A Change of Plan | Anonymous |
| The story sound promising. There are two little typos in the first chapter that I thought you'd like to know about.
He had almost . . . Dumbledore where [were] a bit different from . . . Dumbledore appeared, may I temp[t] you?” Author's Response: Guess even the World’s Best Beta can miss things. All I will say in defense is, “You shoulda seen ‘em before she got a hold of ‘em.” Well, no. Nobody should have seen them then. Thank you – all fixed! | |||
| June W | 2004.08.03 - 06:42PM | 15: Chapter 15: A Long Day.... | Anonymous |
| Okay, so maybe it's just a HALF cliffhanger, since Snape found her. I really, really like the sneaky way he maneuvers Lucius into doing what he wants while maintaining his cover, and hope she remembers how Snape rescued her. More, please! | |||
| Melpomene Erato | 2004.08.03 - 01:57AM | 14: Chapter 14: His Mark | Anonymous |
| He's so mean. Why was he angry before he saw the mark? Author's Response: That's coming right up in the next chapter which I will post later today. | |||
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