Reviews for Stars Are Blind
a1severuslives |
2010.09.15 - 12:36AM |
11: Stars are Blind |
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I liked the Draco insertion. Not sure if I want to see Hermione's reaction and Andromeda ?retreat? from Severus again ! Tim is going to hit the roof!!
Author's Response: Haha! Well, what good is a guilty moment if there are no witnesses? Fortunately I can tell you that Hermione and Tim's reactions are a good way off. Some other people, however... (shakes head) Thank you, again! |
a1severuslives |
2010.09.14 - 05:03PM |
11: Stars are Blind |
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Good Onions Mate!
Author's Response: Why thank you! (Or is there a proper response in Australian lingo?) ;) |
linda0506 |
2010.09.14 - 04:32PM |
11: Stars are Blind |
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Ah, it was lovely. I hope they can stay together now!
Author's Response: So do I. Unfortuantely, what happened didn't actually resolve anything, being the mad impulse of a moment. :/ Thank you! |
FreeRaven |
2010.09.14 - 12:21AM |
1: New Orbits |
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Let you know what I think, eh? Well I think this is rather ambitious but brilliant, creative and original! I am very excited about catching unto your work here, and I wanted you to know that I am ALL in after this first chapter. I don't tend to review per chapter but I hope you are encouraged to continue forward til the end. Looking forward to reading on-thank you!
-FreeRaven
Author's Response: Why thank you! I hope you continue to enjoy the story. |
a1severuslives |
2010.09.14 - 12:18AM |
10: Fragile Inertia |
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Hi there, great chapter. I haven't been around to review lately. Although I will throttle you if A resists S one more time!! ( If you need any tourist info for Hermione from Aus just ask, we have a saying here Good Onyas {good on you} it has been commonly misinterpreted as Good Onions Mate!!causing much confusion to tourists!)
Author's Response: Heh heh, thank you. The inertia has indeed become fragile, and (small preview) the first line of the next chapter is "Why are you torturing me this way?" The torture will definitely stop, although Andromeda will be no less muddled. I'm not sure how much tourist info I'll need for Australia. All of that will happen off-stage, so to speak. I'm glad to know you're available as a resource, though. Thanks, again! We may go back "down under" in the future. |
linda0506 |
2010.09.13 - 11:16AM |
10: Fragile Inertia |
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Oh Lordy, will it ever happen between those two? Severus must be really frustrated.
Author's Response: This was on the edge of too far, wasn't it? It will be different in the next chapter. Thanks for the review! |
a1severuslives |
2010.09.03 - 05:48PM |
9: Constant Velocity |
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Pure Agony!!
Author's Response: Well, I hadn't written any good UST in a while...(evil laugh)... Actually, it's agony for Andromeda, too. She knows what will give her at least part of her family back, but she wants something completely different. |
linda0506 |
2010.09.03 - 05:48PM |
9: Constant Velocity |
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This tension is unbearable. They must resolve things soon. I find I don't like Hermione muscling in.
Author's Response: Poor Hermione is still so young, and even though she's done some very grown up things, managing romance isn't one of them. She has a lot to learn. As for the tension... it's going to end, honest. ;) Thanks for the review! |
a1severuslives |
2010.08.23 - 09:21PM |
8: Outside Forces |
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Excellent! Severus must be quite weak still to just make snide remarks and grump about the suitors. The last paragraph was great. I hope Draco changes sides and backs up Severus in his pursuit of Andromeda. You know, I suspect Hermione sees Severus as something of a trophy husband!
Author's Response: Thank you! Trophy husband... you might be right about that. He is still weak, although he feels mostly better. Draco doesn't exactly have a side here, but he knows who his friends are. I hope you continue to enjoy! |
Eleni |
2010.08.14 - 09:43AM |
7: Bodies in Motion |
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Hermione is in for a big disapointment, poor her. It is a hard time for her with her parents abandoning her. Severus deserve a lot of happines though, and a grown woman would be a better choice I think. Well we will see what you have in mind for them
Author's Response: Hermione has a great deal to go through, just as anyone her age would. Each of these people has an agenda, some of them coincide, at least at points. Thanks for the review! |
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