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| Eleni | 2010.08.14 - 03:39AM | 1: New Orbits | Signed |
| I like all your stories and this chapter is very promising, looking forward to following it. Now on to the next chapter Author's Response: I hope you enjoy this story. Thank you for your support! | |||
| a1severuslives | 2010.08.13 - 07:08PM | 7: Bodies in Motion | Signed |
| Andromeda!! Let him kiss you before Hermione breaks your leg!! Author's Response: Hee hee! I love to picture cage matches with Hermione/Luna, but Hermione against a witch who survived being Bellatrix's sister? I think I have to put my money on Andromeda, *snerk!* Thanks so much for the review! | |||
| linda0506 | 2010.08.13 - 03:04PM | 7: Bodies in Motion | Signed |
| I like this portayal of Snape, he's rather masterful with Andromeda. He isn't afraid to tell her what he wants, as he was with Lily. Looking forward to more chapters. Author's Response: Snape is more grown up and he's got this sense that now he gets to be his own man. Thank you! | |||
| a1severuslives | 2010.08.10 - 07:46PM | 6: Particle Collision | Signed |
| You have addressed something which bugged me a lot with canon, that Slytherin is just a long word for shit! Canon would have been much improved if Cedric Diggory was a member of the green and silver house. Author's Response: Thank you! You can thank one of my friends, who goes as excessivelyperky over on ffn. She worries constantly about the kids in Salazar's house and asked a lot of pertinent questions as the story began. It will be a better story thanks to her, a little meatier than just a romance. With my tongue firmly in my cheek, I will strongly suspect that now movie!Cedric is a vampire, he might well belong in Slytherin, LOL. Thanks for all your great reviews! | |||
| a1severuslives | 2010.08.07 - 09:43PM | 5: Stars Fall Down | Signed |
| Amazing chapter! Great writing. Author's Response: Thank you! That scene watching out the window is intended to correspond, roughly, to the last chapter of the other story. | |||
| a1severuslives | 2010.07.27 - 10:35PM | 4: Gravitational Pull | Signed |
| Go Snape! I really like Tim, I've said that before. Glad Andromeda is a Black and has the family name behind her to express a different opinion on Lily and James. Lily did what the vast majority of women would do. I'm still trying to figure out what was so special about Lily's eyes, I must have missed the sentence where her unique laser eyeball powers were qualified. Just a very minor language pick here, I'm an Aussie and our everyday vocab is very similar to the Brits. You use the word diaper, nappy would be more seamless. Thanks for using 'Mum' and not 'Mom' as a few American authors still do. Author's Response: Oh, snap... I should go after that diaper. Thanks for pointing it out. I'm glad you're still enjoying this. Thanks for the review! | |||
| a1severuslives | 2010.07.20 - 08:12PM | 3: Geocentric Orbit | Signed |
| Skulks! I should have said Draco skulks straight out of canon! Snape would Stride. Author's Response: Yes, Draco definitely skulks. Maybe in his own mind he strides, though. ;) | |||
| a1severuslives | 2010.07.20 - 08:10PM | 3: Geocentric Orbit | Signed |
| You have done a great job of Draco again, he just strides straight out of canon. Tim is very nice, very realistic for the Tonks's to have a squib son, ( I find JKR's writing to be somewhat prejudiced even with her 'muggle loving' families). So glad to see Severus unresponsive to Hermione, and possibly finding himself desirous of Mrs Tonks. You had me worried with Hermione prettying herself up for SS. Actually, I can see her having a crush on Snape (if he hadn't been so positively nasty to her). I cannot see Snape being attracted to such a young thing though, he is not a superficial person and would be looking for a whole lot more than a fawning girl. Author's Response: Oh, my, I see I have fallen behind on replies! Thank you for the review! I'm glad you like Tim. It seemed to me that a couple like Andromeda and Ted would have more than one child. Hermione is an integral part of the story, but perhaps not as we've seen her in most fanon. | |||
| a1severuslives | 2010.07.11 - 02:43AM | 2: Interstellar Communication | Signed |
| Hi there, I have been very much enjoying this story. I really like the inclusion of Draco, he has a view point which is well worth seeing. Please reassure me this won't be HG/SS, that Hermione helped SS at the start like she would have done,and now is an observer. Author's Response: Shoot, I can't explicitly say anything on that subject without giving away some major plot. I'll just point out that there is a good reason this wasn't posted on Ashwinder. Thank you for the review, and I hope you will continue to enjoy it! | |||
| linda0506 | 2010.07.03 - 06:15AM | 1: New Orbits | Signed |
| I'm enjoying your story very much, and am intrigued as to where it's going next. More please! Author's Response: Oh, thank you! I hope you like the next chapters. | |||
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