Reviews for Two Sides Against the Middle
pitwitch |
2009.01.06 - 10:07AM |
54: The Tournament Ends |
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Anxiously awaiting more ...
Author's Response: It's coming, and gets a bit darker, of course... |
debjunk |
2009.01.01 - 12:47PM |
54: The Tournament Ends |
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Oh, poor Neville. (I keep saying that.) How duped he must have felt. Hopefully, Hope's note will brighten his spirits and help him feel better about himself.
Author's Response: I re-read GOF in order to write about that school year and I got such a case of the creeps after the first DADA class when Moody/Crouch put his hand on Neville's shoulder and took him to his office... |
debjunk |
2009.01.01 - 12:35PM |
53: Back to the Shadows |
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I really like seeing that missing scene with Severus and Voldemort. It's something that would have been nice to see in canon. Of course, canon is Harry's story, not Severus'.
Author's Response: Thank you! I always felt the same way. What horrors awaited him after he went, that kept him from returning to "normal life" for over a week? This is how I pictured that conversation going. |
debjunk |
2008.12.29 - 01:21AM |
52: And So it Begins |
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Neville's little aside that he probably won't get a sibling was sad. Poor guy, he certainly has had his share of heartache.
Now, on to the Dark Mark and more mystery and intrigue as Dumbly's spy. Poor Severus, he's never at peace (except when he's alone with Emily.)
Author's Response: Neville has certainly got many valid reasons to feel sorry for himself. It's amazing that he became so well-rounded and generally cheerful. I'm really thinking hard about how to do the next school year because I think Severus is almost relieved to finally be doing something, instead of waiting, but that feeling is surely temporary. |
debjunk |
2008.12.29 - 01:20AM |
51: Something New |
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How funny that Severus had to deliver the baby! His Mother-in-law was a bit harsh. No harm was done. I don't think those kids come until they're ready, no matter how much rolling in the hay might be done!
Author's Response: Thanks! I think Severus took it in stride since it became yet another of their private jokes. Meanwhile, you know how doctors can be; some get miffed when they cannot control what's going on. Some things have been known to cause or intensify labor, but I think the timing has to be just right it happens. Let's just say it's never worked for me. |
debjunk |
2008.12.19 - 12:41AM |
50: Holiday Events |
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Oh yay, I'm so glad you had Hope and 'that boy' dance. And Severus' eagle eye caught it all. Their reactions were sweet, his being very fatherly, and hers being a bit more laid back. I find it reflects my attitudes with my 15 year old and her father's attitudes towards her quite well.
Author's Response: Aren't Daddies wonderful? It may be a bit cliche, but Severus Snape with a teen daughter would be a lot like that, I think. Thank you for the review! |
makaem |
2008.12.17 - 07:38AM |
49: The Tournament Begins |
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Parental PDA, poor Hope. I love how affectionate you have Severus being after he feels the baby move. Great chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you! Somehow I always picture him as an eager father. |
debjunk |
2008.12.15 - 11:05PM |
49: The Tournament Begins |
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Ooo, is Neville going to go with Hope? That would be fun! (To the Yule Ball, I mean. I thought you were psychic there for a moment and would know what I was saying without expressing it.) Heh, heh, poor girl, having to sit through her parents flirting like school kids. Lol
Author's Response: Well, we know whom Neville goes with. Poor Hope has her share of woes, I guess. Watching PDAs of even the mildest sort between one's parents is never pretty. |
makaem |
2008.12.14 - 08:24AM |
48: Quidditch Cup |
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I love it! It's like a drinking game meets strip poker.
Author's Response: Thank you! It's probably the chapter that gave me the most fun. |
makaem |
2008.12.14 - 08:20AM |
47: Out of the Blue |
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Lovely chapter. I like this version of his life.
Author's Response: Thank you! I wanted them to have a fun summer. Canon gets so ugly so soon from this point in the timeline. |
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